Selasa, 25 November 2014

unforgotable moment



Birthday Moment
Do you have a beautiful moment in your live? I am sure that everyone have that moment. I will tell you about my beautiful moment. When my birthday last years, me and my friends have a planning to go to waterfall, but when I arrived in my friend's house, the one of my friend’s father called me that my friend get accident because of me and cannot coming. I am so panic and I decided to go to his house with my friends but my friends said that its because me, I am so sad and cry because all of my friend blame me and when I am cry, my friend came with tart and a big gift to me, my other friends huge me and said happy birthday to me . Its so surprised and I am so happy. After that we went to waterfall and something funny accident happen,  my friends push me in waterfall but the one of my friend fall too so we pulled my other friends and all of my friends fall in waterfall. We played water together until our cloth wrapped. after that we went back to my friend's house. In my friend's house I find so many gift to me. I am so happy and I will never forget that moment. Thanks to my friends.

2 komentar:

  1. iin... I think "Do you ever have a beautiful moment in your live?" you can make more simple like "have you ever...., or Do you have a beautiful moment in your life?

    BalasHapus
  2. when I arrive in my friend house "you have to when we arrived in my friend's house". because it is simple past and you less "s" as possessive.

    BalasHapus