Rabu, 10 Desember 2014

retell story



You are more beautiful than you think

Gill Zamora who worked as a police in San Jose in 1995 – 2011 is a FBI Trained Forensic Artist. He made an experiment with asked to some people to describe their physical appearance especially their face like eyes, chin, hair and etc without saw them first, not only their physical appearance  but also described the people who they met before.
In the end, Zamora made 2 skets . the first skets is by their described and the other is described by people who they met. The first sketch looked bad than the other. Zamora asked them to give command and conclusion about the sketch.
The big conclusion that we can learning from this story is “ you are more beautiful than you think “ , it means that we must be grateful about our over balance and don't just focused to appreciate something in our physic that we don't have.

3 komentar:

  1. The firs skets is looked bad than the other. I think you use the first no the firs.

    BalasHapus
  2. The first sketch is looked bad than the other :>
    if you use is+ v3...it's mean passive...so i think you can omit is and your sentence become past..
    The first sketch looked bad than the other

    BalasHapus