Birthday Moment
Do
you have a beautiful moment in your live? I am sure that everyone have
that moment. I will tell you about my beautiful moment. When my birthday last
years, me and my friends have a planning to go to waterfall, but when I arrived
in my friend's house, the one of my friend’s father called me that my friend get
accident because of me and cannot coming. I am so panic and I decided to go to
his house with my friends but my friends said that its because me, I am so sad
and cry because all of my friend blame me and when I am cry, my friend came
with tart and a big gift to me, my other friends huge me and said happy birthday to
me . Its so surprised and I am so happy. After that we went to waterfall and
something funny accident happen, my friends
push me in waterfall but the one of my friend fall too so we pulled my other
friends and all of my friends fall in waterfall. We played water together until
our cloth
wrapped. after that we went back to my friend's
house. In my friend's house I find so many gift to me. I am so happy and I will
never forget that moment. Thanks to my friends.
iin... I think "Do you ever have a beautiful moment in your live?" you can make more simple like "have you ever...., or Do you have a beautiful moment in your life?
BalasHapuswhen I arrive in my friend house "you have to when we arrived in my friend's house". because it is simple past and you less "s" as possessive.
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